| "The Pregnant Disease" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHH.......how sweet Hiei want to apologize. Sorry Hiei you didn't kill all the bounty-hunters.
Waiting........................................... |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good, I like it. What are the other two up to? Will they seek their revenge against Hiei though Kurama and his unborn child. Hmmmmmmmmm....I think so.
Still would like to know......just how did Kurama swallow that egg???
"Someone has to have sex with Kurama" , was Hiei quick to jump at the chance or What?????{LOL}
Waiting........................................ |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 19:46 CST
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I have no idea what this anime is about, but I think it's quite interesting. Anyways, I was curious about YYH fanfics and stumbled upon yours. My, my,... I kinda think it was cute. REALLY! I can admit it... it was truly great and creative too. |
Reviewed By: rosevine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*falls down laughing* oh dear me, that was soo funny!! Kurama pregnant?? ^^ aww and Hiei was acting so sweet...keep going!! |
Reviewed By: Talking Sock [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it it's so cute. Update soon !! |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: November 27, 2002 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!Please don't let us waiting any longer.As for the baby's name,what about Takuma or Shiriu-purple dragon,like in Saint Seyia anime you know,it would fit the baby quiet well.
Please write more soon!Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaase? |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: November 27, 2002 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!Please don't lat us waiting any longer.As for the baby's name,what about Takuma or Shiriu-purple dragon,like in Saint Seyia anime you know,it would fit the baby quiet well.
Please write more soon!Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaase? |
Reviewed By: Eikichi_Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I'd have to say the story lacked rhythm... it was crazy.. jumping all over the place... and inserting the (he looked at the clock) instead of saying something like... Hiei turned his eyes, leveling them with the clock face ... or something otherwise descriptive... it made the flow of the story rocky, holding the feeling of being thrown around from piece to piece.
Er... it's a good plot though... and as to the creatures following Hiei er something, they could be a band of bounty hunters who have been told to bring him in... or something like that. I mean.. come on... who wouldn't want to test their skills against Hiei, or have his head on a pike for a conversational piece? And as for the baby's name... how about Kurei? *grins stupidly* Just mix the two demons' names or something. It usually turns out pretty good that way.
Sorry for the long review thingy. Rawr! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more!!!!!! i think i just figured out the answer to my question on how two men actually do it!!! i think i would have been better not to know!!!! i have been scared!!!! other then scaring me for life i luv 'dis fic!!!!!more!!!! it reminds me of the movie jounior!!!! with arnold schwardtsnagor (^_^0 i don't know how to spell his last name) got pregnant and stuff.... he wasn't gay though!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light On: November 25, 2002 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this story is sweet!! Please continue this ASAP, I want to find out what happens! Poor Kurama... at least he has Yusuke and Kuabara to help him out in his time of need.
A name? Hmm... well, how about he name the cild after him? I mean his real name or maybe after his partner when he was a youkai. I cannot remember his name... ooh I got it! If the baby is a girl call her Nobara! It means 'wild rose' in japanese.
Now a villian who is after Hiei? Toughy. Well... I got one that am using in one of my stories but you can use him if ya want. Name's Reficul and he's a man possessed by a demon lord but you can change it that he's a crazed youkai. Sorry i can't think anymore but I'm feeling relaspe from my stomach flu this weekend. Hope to see a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRR!!!! You just _HAVE_ to end in cliff hangers and make us suffer DONT YOU? You had better write more soon or I'll come over there and pulirise you!
Neko-Yasha
p.s sorry about sending two reviews *.* |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRR!!!! You just _HAVE_ to end in cliff hangers and make us suffer DONT YOU? You had better write more soon or I'll come over there and pulirise you!
Neko-Yasha |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrrr!!!! Why'd you stop? It was just getting good. Write more soon!
Neko-Yasha |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrrr!!!! Why'd you stop? It was just getting good. Write more soon!
Neko-Yasha |
Reviewed By: Black_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnneeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! get the story done! i lurve this!!!!!!!!! |
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