| "The Pregnant Disease" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chris On: March 08, 2003 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
The baby room is called the Nursery. |
Reviewed By: Youko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, without a doubt, the best Fic I've EVER read! It was well writen, cute, funny, had Hiei AND Wufei, and was overall GOOD!
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: BlaqheartedDemon On: February 10, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
loved it!
write some more !
its a sweet story and i hope you write more like it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 16:57 CST
Comment/Review:
*sqeals stupidly* that was the best hieixkurama story I ever read. |
Reviewed By: Holli On: January 27, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of strange YYH fanfiction, and I was really pleased on how you could get straight to the points of the story. I've read too much YYH fanfiction that drags on forever, especially lemon situations with their kinky, let too long descriptions. You handled this kind of story well, and had just enough lemon without being excessive. Besides, I like a good fanfiction that has lemon, but without the lemon being the main focus of the story. Your story had nice plot. And as always, Hiei and Kurama are my favorite anime couple, and seeing one or the other pregnant always makes me laugh every time. I was also glad to see such nice, very recent fanfiction. The only problem I had with this fanfiction is that I don't like crossovers, no matter who it is or what anime it is, but you didn't make a big deal over your crossover in this fanfic. Good job! I hope to see more YYH fanfiction from you soon! |
Reviewed By: Talking Sock [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 02:48 CST
Comment/Review:
It's all finished! Noo! Write a sequel or maybe another couple like Yusuke and Kuwabara have kids or something! ^^; But I loved it anyway. Rose and Bud hehee. |
Reviewed By: Tsumi and Kirei On: January 17, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirei: Good job! I didn't like the sex though...
Tsumi: Oh shut up! You never like sex scenes! I think that they are the hardest things to write so I give props to anyone who can!
Kirei: Whatever...
Tsumi: I really love this fic! I think you should consider a sequel...
Kirei: I agree for once
Both: Laterz! |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Zephyros On: January 06, 2003 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cute ^_^ !!! I liked it very much!!!! KuramaxHiei forever!! I like the ending soooo much...... |
Reviewed By: Lita On: January 05, 2003 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
WHY DID U STOP!? it was getting really good, please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Megumi-chan On: January 01, 2003 01:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww... That was so sweet, I cried! Err... Don't mind me. I'm getting weirder everyday. 'Nyways, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
~Megumi~
Megumi : I agree with Ganymede10. What kinda name IS Rose and Bud???
Hiei : Hey! I thought it was nice! *glaring and taking out his sword*
Megumi : Err... Very nice names!!! Very cute!!!! It fits them, don't you think???? (^^;;;)
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Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: December 31, 2002 03:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just what kind of names are Rose and Bud anyway?
Did you watch too many fairy tales lately? Anyway I liked, but I want to know what happened with Kurama.
This is the the chapter I liked the least. Sorry!
But that's what I think. Anyway, pleeeaeaaase keep going! |
Reviewed By: Talking Sock [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 05:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Write moree! |
Reviewed By: Kirei & Tsumi On: December 23, 2002 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tsumi: Wah! You did such an awesome job! ^_^_^
Kirei: I didn't like chapter 2...
Tsumi: That's cuz you don't like hentai thingies....you are so weak and weird...
Kirei: Shut up!
Tsumi: Any way...I'd like to say how good you did! ^_^_^_^_^ I loved your fic!
Tsumi & Kirei: Laterz! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your wayss more reasonable on how he got the egg up his ass but my way is better ^_________________^ you see kurama was swimming in the demon world..... then he sits on an egg while he's naked and he can't get it out..... |
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