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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good, I like how you got into the emotions, but I think it could have been a lot longer. You could have mentioned a lot more of her past interactions with him, it would have made it seem more intimate. You could have also wrote a little lemon scene, lol, but that's just my perverted self! but other than that, I thought it was sweet. Bulma's memories of him are very tender!
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Reviewed By: anonymous 2 On: March 07, 2005 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm SUCH a big Mariah Carey fan and also a huge Vegeta/Bulma fan. So wheni got a glimpse of your finfic i completely wigged out! Thanks so much for putting such a touch fiction up. Perfect song to go with it! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
::tears fall:: sugoi.. ::snifflez:: that was so..::sniffle sniffle:: so..sad!!!! I almost needed to used 2 boxes of tissues.. waaahahaha..lol..i'll be fine..i loved that..even if it was heart-breaking..oi..you get all tens and the year's best "make you cry" fanfiction award! perfect as eva' i need to go get some more tissues..buh bye~ ::balls her eyes out::
Love Always,
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