| "Cherry Warz" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't get enough of reading this story. It's on my top fave erotic stories list. Ohgami screwing Maria is really fantastic and lots of fun especially since I'm an OhgamiX Maria fan. It was kinda masturbatory. I can't really wait for Ohgami to screw every other girl as he did to Maria in your next chapter if you will write it. I'm sure your next chapter will be as terrific as the second chapter. When will he scew the other girls? Your writing their sex scenes in second chapter was very magnificently erotic in an terrifically artistic way. I love your style of writing. When will you write a third chapter to Sakura Wars NC-17 story? I can't wait for you to write and upload a new chapter to your SAkura Wars story. I want you to have Ohgami to screw every girl especially Iris. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING YOUR STORY! DON"T LET IT BE DEAD!
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an inspirational epic story this is. Ayame sex scene was somewhat unappealing. But I like OhgamiXMaria sex better. I loved the way Maria and Ohgami had made oral sex on each other. Ohgami's sex with Maria was well-described and written beautifully and erotically. I wish you'd continue this story because I love it. When will you write the next story? I want Ohgami to screw every other girl there.
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an inspirational epic story this is. Ayame sex scene was somewhat unappealing. But I like OhgamiXMaria sex better. I loved the way Maria and Ohgami had made oral sex on each other. Ohgami's sex with Maria was well-described and written beautifully and erotically. I wish you'd continue this story because I love it. When will you write the next story? I want Ohgami to screw every other girl there.
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an inspirational epic story this is. Ayame sex scene was somewhat unappealing. But I like OhgamiXMaria sex better. I loved the way Maria and Ohgami had made oral sex on each other. Ohgami's sex with Maria was well-described and written beautifully and erotically. I wish you'd continue this story because I love it. When will you write the next story? I want Ohgami to screw every other girl there.
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Reviewed By: Stelok On: September 27, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I noticed some rather annoying grammatical errors in this story. But despite that, it's still great story. I was delighred to see Ohgami fuck Maria I absolutely loved Ohgami and Maria's sex scene. Please continue. I want Ohgami to fuck every girl especially Iris in the Hanagumi there. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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