| "Lush" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Ex-Angel, dice and bakura On: February 08, 2004 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! You matched their personalities PERFECTLY!! I luff the story!! YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUAL!!!! ^^ I love it to bits..!! *huggles it* Youji and Aya are so cute...
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Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... it's 3am and I just finished reading all 11 chapters straight and I actually have tears in my eyes and a huge grin on my face... what else can i say? *claps wildly*
oh and i'm a total Lush maniac too, I positively squealed with delight everytime you mentioned my two fave bishounen using a Lush product! Hee hee, I'll never look at my 'Black magic' massage bar again without having gorgeous images of Aya and Yohji pop up in my head! *drools* ^_- |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: December 31, 2002 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning...utterly stunning. That's the only word I can think of that comes even close to describing this fic.
In the last chapter, when Yohji was looking at the pic Aya drew of him, I was literally reduced to tears by how beautiful it seemed. The whole story seemed to come to life and I loved every moment of it (although I did feel a bit intrusive while reading the lemons ^_^;)
It's stories like this that keep me rivetted to being a fangirl for a long long time to come. ^_^
The 4:30 am on my clock just goes to show you how rivetted I was. ^_^
PEACE OUT =) |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 06:04 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a wonderful story. You've got a good handle on characterization and dialouge.
The main problem I had with the story was the overuse of the "Lush" products. Not in the fact that Yohji was giving Aya all kinds of soap and lotions and stuff like that...more that I felt that I was reading an advertisement for the products rather than the story. It was a jolt out the flow of the story line.
Other than that I thought the story was great. Good sceenes between Yohji and Aya. Smut is our friend. ;) |
Reviewed By: OpusAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 12:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice! I agree, there's not enough Youji/Aya fics out there. I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. I'll be looking forward to more from you. |
Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a story so perfectly good that a proper review for it can not possibly be completed in a few short sentances, so I must make due with a lesser one. Great work, wonderful characterization, best pairing in the world, nicely done and interesting lemon scenes, good descriptions, and excellent writing. Bravo. |
Reviewed By: Cheshire On: November 13, 2002 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's you wrote a very good story, I really enjoyed it, in fact I stayed up all night just so I could finish reading it. Your a wonderful writer. |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am an absolute, all time lover of this pairing whether it be Aya x Youji, Youji x Aya. As long as they are together I am happy and I will definitely read it. I enjoyed this immensely and I loved the ending *sniff* I have hayfever. You should write more because if these two are in it I will bloody read it ^_~ and because you have talent. Keep up the great work I will watch out for you.
shaeric |
