| "Misdemeaner" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Rie On: August 24, 2005 08:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
thanks muchly for NOT portraying ken as a klutz who couldn't do anything normal right. beautiful fic; really hot!
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Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute,sweet and hot. ^_^ me likey!
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Reviewed By: KittyKristi On: March 23, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're style of writing was really good, you have such a clear way of stating things it was very enjoyable. I think I saw a few spelling errors, but none that really mattered.. One thing I want to note is when Aya woke up from the nightmare and saw Ken. He told Ken that he had a dream where he died. I thought the way he stated it so bluntly was sort of out of character. Also the thought was sort of repeated in Ken's mind. I saw you were trying to project your *full* idea there, but you just needed to spend more time figuring out how. The idea of it wasn't the most original, I will say. But I still enjoyed reading it mostly due to that writing style of yours. I think it was a *really* great fic, but you should get a beta-reader to help you out too. If you'd like, I'll do it for you gladly. ^^ My e-mail's AnimeFangrrl@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sad and sweet... bittersweet? I like it... and hey, I usually go for YohjiXAya, so that's saying something... **grin** |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope to see more weiss stuff from you. I love the two that you've written so far. ;) |
Reviewed By: LadyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh*
I have always loved your GW works but I have found that when it comes to Weiss Kreuz your even better at portraying the characters.
That was an excellent story I hope you decided to write more AyaxKen soon maybe even some AyaxYohji ~_^ |
