| "A Life Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: AisuErufu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Woo! If I was in a dark and prostituting mood that would seriosuly hit the spot! But right now I just find it amusing! Very good D/Chick! (Yeah, I figured after god knows how long that's it's time I start reviewing your stuff....) |
Reviewed By: Ed On: December 06, 2002 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I must say, it's pretty good.
Yall who don't like her wrting need to live with it!
Sorry about that. Well can't wait to read the rest when you get it up.
Also think it's great your from Texas, I am too. |
Reviewed By: Ed On: December 06, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say, it's pretty good. Yall who don't like her wrting need to live with it! Sorry about that. Well can't wait to read the rest when you get it up. |
Reviewed By: tomsometimestobysometimeskellysometimeswilbur On: November 15, 2002 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Perv! Ya lil sicko perverted Hairy Larry! You should be ashamed of yerself for writing such horrible gay man porn!!!
Okay, okay, oh well...
Good writing style, disturbing subject. |
Reviewed By: Grey Soul [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you have done it again. You have taken the purest, rawest of human emotions and transformed them not only into words, but into expressions that touch much deeper within. You take such a miserable existance, and conform it in such a way as that even people who (like me) live the exact opposite life of Gareas can feel everything he feels... Understand why he does and why he is. |
