| "The Greatest Man" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very ,very beatuful.*a tear rolls down cheek* |
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a -very- moving piece. I loved it. And the song fit in wonderfully. The ending was well done as well.
The -only- thing I have to say (regarding grammar/etc) is that I think you use commas a little too much in areas. But that's fine, you might want a lot of pauses in the reading for a piece like this.
Do more fics as wonderful as this. Please. As a reader I'm begging you. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I'M CRYING HYSTERICALLY. THAT WAS SOOO GOOD. IT REALLY CAPTURED THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE. I CAN'T STAND IT!!! I'M OFF TO BAWL!
~Wah! I mean, Frabs! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic really touched my heart. I even found myself crying silent tears. I really have to say that you have wrote an exeptionally beautiful fanfic. I would certainly reccomend this to anyone who has recently lost a loved one. |
Reviewed By: Candyland [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give this straight tens. Man...I don't usually cry when I read fanfics, but this one...rats...oh man. That was absolutely beautiful. Indescribably beautiful. Vegeta really does love his family, but he never gets the recognition for it. He's so complex...wonderfully done. |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester On: November 30, 2002 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Good. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
That ... was so sad ... now I'm crying ... it was so beautiful ... but sad ... I think I'll just go cry now ... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 12, 2002 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Serves me right. I should've gone to bed and hour ago. Now I'm sitting here crying my eyes out and having a hard time trying to type a review. This was really amazing and totally depressing at the same time. You did a great job in getting across the pain of losing a loved one. I don't know what else I can say. T_T. |
