| "The Secret of the Center." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
hi i'm guessing that this story doesn't go along with how the characters are in the show seeing as u have the ages wrong and mimi being tai's sister, but it still is a great start and can't wait to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: pearsmallsky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's cute .. can wait.. but it's a little confusesz^^ |
Reviewed By: berker On: November 12, 2002 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice, short chaptor but all in all very nice. |
