| "Desk Tops and Mazoku Bottoms" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: KitTerKatTerMeoW On: February 12, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been going through the website reading a lot of fics, and yours have very good grammar and spelling. Thank you! You seem to be a very good writer and I hope you keep writing. I've read one other one with Xel/Zel involving a desk, but yours is much better, in my opinion. I enjoyed reading it. And just fyi, you're the first person I've rated, so I hope you feel special. ;P
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Title: Was impressed until the end.
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"Well, that was my first Slayers yaoi fic and if I don't get more than eight reviews it will be my last." Up until about the last three paragraphs I was enjoying this story. Viscious sex is a total turn-on for me. And then I read 'stay with me' 'always' and I gagged. What a way to ruin a perfectly fucked up sex-scene. Anyway, your writing is good, but short, it needs more description to drag the readers in. Your dialoguing is good, but please don't destroy that talent by adding in fluff at random intervalls. As for the 'if I don't get 8 reviews' thing. You Arrogant Prick, you. Never threaten your reviewers, (and yes, that's threatening them) because IT MAKES THEM -NOT- WANT TO REVIEW. And it lowers other author's opinions of you. Sure, you have talent, I'll give you that, but threatening people does not make for good gravy. After reading that I don't really want to read any of your other stories. Which says what about the reaction your comment inspired? Anyway, other than the fluff that ruined it and the lack of description, it was a good story. I'd say 'write more' but that might inspire you to write more 'review me or else, mindless slaves!' comments. And I certainly don't want to encourage that behavior.
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Reviewed By: Sherra-chan On: January 17, 2004 16:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I plainly agree with Zoey Hellmaster: Xelloss on the bottom and hard biting zelgadiss are great. These are two things which make a good fic on their own.... SO, your fic is a GOOD one ^_____________^
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice! It's hard to find good smut Xel x Zel fics. This one is very good! ^____^ Definitely keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 07, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! YAOI!!! Mmmmm... that was one of the best x/z pwp's i've ever read. that was your first?! WOWIES!! that was extreamly good for a first! THANX!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Malik Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! ZelxXel.... my favorite pairing ever! I love all of your fics! Please write more!!!! All hail Her Omni-Potence! |
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: June 13, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!MOREMORE! Ohmygodohmygod! How I LOVE Xel-on-the-bottom stories!!!! Ok, your story was PWP? I DONT CARE! ^_^ As long as I can read phrase as like "Zelgadis bite HARD", it's perfect!! |
Reviewed By: ThursdayStGiles On: April 07, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very enjoyable! I'm glad you decided to write some yaoi. Feel free to write more! (hint hint). Whoever disliked it obviously has no appreciation for a fun fic. More! |
Reviewed By: eli On: February 21, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the desk and the fact that zel is still searching for a cure. very nice yaoi ^-^ |
Reviewed By: chibisama00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE! MORE NAUGHTY X/Z! |
Reviewed By: Kib On: January 21, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was....SWEEEEEET! I liked the ending, and i think it would be interesting to stress and continue on why Xel stayed. |
Reviewed By: Xellina-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.... a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but overall, a very good fic. You said you wouldn't write any more if you didn't get any reviews, so here I am, doing my civic duty. *smiles* As a writer and enjoyer of both Xel/Lina and Xel/Zel, I'm sorry to hear that you don't do Xel/Lina anymore. *pouts* I would definitely read your stuff in the future! Thanks for the yumminess! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Child of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEE HEE! VEEEEEEEERY AMUSING! ^________________^ Feel free to write more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kiriana On: November 17, 2002 19:22 CST
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All i can say is Wow. One of my fav slash pairings for Slayers. This was a really interesting PWP. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: jess On: November 16, 2002 18:30 CST
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i agree with GreenFire, there can never be enough yaoi pwp fics. Make more this one was good |
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