| "Desk Tops and Mazoku Bottoms" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sherra-chan On: January 17, 2004 16:06 CST
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I plainly agree with Zoey Hellmaster: Xelloss on the bottom and hard biting zelgadiss are great. These are two things which make a good fic on their own.... SO, your fic is a GOOD one ^_____________^
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice! It's hard to find good smut Xel x Zel fics. This one is very good! ^____^ Definitely keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 07, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! YAOI!!! Mmmmm... that was one of the best x/z pwp's i've ever read. that was your first?! WOWIES!! that was extreamly good for a first! THANX!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Malik Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! ZelxXel.... my favorite pairing ever! I love all of your fics! Please write more!!!! All hail Her Omni-Potence! |
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: June 13, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!MOREMORE! Ohmygodohmygod! How I LOVE Xel-on-the-bottom stories!!!! Ok, your story was PWP? I DONT CARE! ^_^ As long as I can read phrase as like "Zelgadis bite HARD", it's perfect!! |
Reviewed By: ThursdayStGiles On: April 07, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very enjoyable! I'm glad you decided to write some yaoi. Feel free to write more! (hint hint). Whoever disliked it obviously has no appreciation for a fun fic. More! |
Reviewed By: eli On: February 21, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the desk and the fact that zel is still searching for a cure. very nice yaoi ^-^ |
Reviewed By: chibisama00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE! MORE NAUGHTY X/Z! |
Reviewed By: Kib On: January 21, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was....SWEEEEEET! I liked the ending, and i think it would be interesting to stress and continue on why Xel stayed. |
Reviewed By: Xellina-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.... a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but overall, a very good fic. You said you wouldn't write any more if you didn't get any reviews, so here I am, doing my civic duty. *smiles* As a writer and enjoyer of both Xel/Lina and Xel/Zel, I'm sorry to hear that you don't do Xel/Lina anymore. *pouts* I would definitely read your stuff in the future! Thanks for the yumminess! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Child of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEE HEE! VEEEEEEEERY AMUSING! ^________________^ Feel free to write more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kiriana On: November 17, 2002 19:22 CST
Comment/Review:
All i can say is Wow. One of my fav slash pairings for Slayers. This was a really interesting PWP. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: jess On: November 16, 2002 18:30 CST
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i agree with GreenFire, there can never be enough yaoi pwp fics. Make more this one was good |
Reviewed By: GreenFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Real great fic^_^. Please don't stop writing these. There can never be too many yaoi PWP. |
Reviewed By: holo On: November 13, 2002 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Are you into slayers too? Im so happy!Im also a fan of slayers. Anyway luv your story. |
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