| "Blood Over Water" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 26, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! its a midvalley+nick story!! i really liked how it ended!!! i was surprised that nick would end up with midvalley, but im just so happy!! im a little pissed at vash though. he's too forgiving. and im really pissed at knives, but thats to be expected. i just cant get over the ending! i loved the story. are you maybe gonna write a seque? |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Should have known what the ? was when I saw the torture, gore, etc. catagories. Who else could it be, Milly? (LOL)
Anyhow,
Man, I'm choking from the emo. A fic that is so moving such as this is very rare. I salute you.
(I might argue about the 'Vash forgiving Knives' thing. Another time, mayhaps.) |
Reviewed By: mali On: November 25, 2002 09:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Mmm... lovely. Wonderful 'fic with a wonderful ending, even if your parting note didn't think so. Heh, 'the pornfreak and the priest'.. sounds like one of those dimestore novels that Millie secretly reads. ^^ Hell, I'd read it too. |
Reviewed By: Eerie On: November 18, 2002 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I really loved this fic. The description was wonderful and the fact that Wolfwood and Vash didn't end up as happily ever after was refreshing. Thank you for writing this! |
Reviewed By: kasianne On: December 24, 2002 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Parts of it I like, parts of it I don't...
The emotions were handled really well, though, and your idea came through strongly...
I don't agree with the rape idea...I just can't see Knives stooping to bother with a human, but that is personal perception, and what you did decide to do with it, you handled well.
Still wondering about that phantom Vashu that 'took care of him' afterwards... Spooooooky :o
Way to throw the twist in there and add a Midvalley. ^^
The fic community needs more Midvalley.
I'm actually shocked at how *little* writing has been done w/ Midvalley in it.
He's got SMUT written ALL OVER HIM!!
Maybe it's written in invisible ink? I don't think enough people are seeing it... o.o
A note on the spelling frontier: Legato only has one t. ^^; |
