| "In The Grass So Deep" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: pink vamp2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ummm things u did "wrong" well i think the kinkyness drives people away, after all not all peps like that kinda stuff as for me i thought it was ok not as good as i would have hoped but, well its hard to wright a good ashitaka and san fic,merley becausew well most peps cant think of san with ashitaka! ^_^; i on the other hand love them togeather and wish there where more of these storys on mm.org!p.a.p need u to continue on buitiful lemons for us!!!!! ~~~nikki-chan~~~~~
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Reviewed By: pSyChOeLePhAnT On: February 28, 2004 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good! pleese write more fics!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 22:34 CST
Comment/Review:
lol sometimes kink is good
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Reviewed By: Molly the younger twin On: November 28, 2003 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
AW! finally the two get together took long enough the only thing I can saw bad about this fic is some of the lang. is kinda unrealistic but thats it. Anyway I gotta go I'm writting my first fic for MM today and I'm only just started so TOODLES!
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Reviewed By: Crystal Princess On: November 11, 2003 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO NO NO! It's all wrong. San should be nervous. She doesn't know how humans mate! RE-DO BIG-TIME!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Marcy A Mc Ott [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a little tip for you, when you would write good lemons.
You schould never know the characters things, they shouldn't know, and dont change theyr character. In your fic Soun knows what sex is, but she lived with wolfes, and i dont think they showed it to her! But your lemon was realy good. I have enjoyed it :-) |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are one screwed in the head mother fucker. You should of had wolf girl want it doggy style. |
Reviewed By: sex goddess On: June 25, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm sooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddd |
Reviewed By: KH On: March 23, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i loved this fanfix sho much!
sho much lemon![thus why i loved it!]
i ono why i enjoy reading lemons.. like yours.. infact im about to read the other 2 you said you wrote.. keep up the good work! i'll be searching for some more of your work!
now that you jus got me hooked on ashikata & san's fanfix.. i can't find anymore =( oh well i can jus keep on reading yours lol..
*KH |
Reviewed By: Adrian On: March 02, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi was excellent I didn't see ANY mitakes and was drawn to reading it twice.....it was great...keep em coming......I gotta go read chapter 2 now.....
~ADRIAN~ |
Reviewed By: Starshine On: January 18, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, with the captions from the movie, her name is spelled simply : San. You asked for reviews, you received one here! *grins* thanks for writting your fic(s). Takes a certain amount of guts to write Lemons. |
Reviewed By: Sweet lemons On: January 10, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER PLLEEAASSEE!!!!!
WE P.A.P NEED THIS LEMONY GOODNESS FROM PEOPLE
LIKE YOU |
Reviewed By: lil lemon On: December 13, 2002 22:46 CST
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There is nothing more satisfying than an oh so sweet lemon...MMMMM...yum, otherwise then that, there's really nothing left to say. Of course, I'm not so sure whether you've captured the essence of the characters, but you wrote an awesome detailed lemon. Don't Stop! Keep Writing! We PAP's (Proud Ass Perverts) need you!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 19:09 CST
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I really loved it!!! Only thing was, I was kind of hoping for another "REAL" round of action with Saun and Ashitaka in the end, one where perhaps he had the freedom of his hands and they both could control eachother's movements and what not...
I love lemons like these where they're so descriptive and everything, it makes the whole thing last longer and more enjoyable.
It was really cute!!! ^_^ Only thing I'd suggest sometimes is to make things a bit more clearer and go back with spellcheck, but it was really well written above all.
Keep Writing!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: If you want the correct spelling, just look at the closing credits at the end of the movie for who does who's voice and what-not, the names should be there. |
Reviewed By: HououKageMusha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! an actual San X Ashitaka lemon! Although I don't think there is a "u" in San's name, although I suppose that could be a Japanese way of spelling it. |
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