| "Orphan Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Rion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! ^^; It's so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Hey! I'm finally done with this story. *hangs head* How pathetic of me for being late >_>. >_> Damn... this story is N~ice. Really. I like the way how the story was told. Very entertaining and I was sort of suspecting 5+H pairing in this story for some strange reason. There are a few errors here and there, misused words like "your" instead of "you are" or "there" instead of "their" etcetera... but overall it really didn't spoil my interest in reading the whole thing thoroughly. But anyways I'm a bit glad that even though Relena's character seemed to be a bit too OoC in my opinion, the way she 'matures' is still there. The emotional strains were nicely described and I love the way when Heero fuzz around Duo ^_^. It's so cute. ;_; I kind of feel bad for the 3+4 pairing. Especially since they broke up... ;_; or should it be 'broke up'? ;_; Breaking them up is hard ;_;.... By the way the background info about how the two had met somehow sparked my interest ^____^ Are you going to write a side-fic about that? If not... may I have your permission to write one side-fic about those two (meaning the 3+4 pairing) *gets on knees* PLE~~ASE? I might not be able to write a lot fanfiction and BE good at it, but I like to try that out *-* PLE~ASE? *ahem* Anyways GREAT work ^_^.
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Reviewed By: CrzCgirl On: March 13, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! I LOVED IT! LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!! You have a great talent. It would be great if this, like became a movie, only the names would have to change, BUT IT'D BE GREAT!! I LOVE IT!!! ...Kudos! JA NE! |
Reviewed By: Konpeitou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geezus that took a while to read, I can't belive you managed to write so much in just a month and a half! That's talent.
I story was very good, and I enjoyed it immensely. Parts of it were kind of predictable, but there were several times I was surprised by your method. The confrontation with Hall seemed a bit anti-climatic, though, and almost had me feeling like "That's it?", but it was nice to see several more chapters after that to explain what happened afterwards, which is kind of hard to find.
Overall, it was still very intriguing the relationships were absolutely wonderful. ^__^ Omedetou! |
Reviewed By: Little_Manga_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't belive I actually sat down and read that all in on seating. Its just I couldn't put it down! Excellent work weaving an intresting complicated story that keep me on the edga of my seat. LMN |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww this fic is so cute! Very long though. I just spent 3 1/2 hours reading this thing... ahhh my poor eyes!
Not to mention I was up till 4am yesterday (sleepover) got up at 7:30 and now its 11pm. I'm so tired and like I said, my poor poor eyes!
Anyways enough of me complaining, eh? The story is excellent. I think you put 'emphasis' (these things '') on a 'few' to many words where they didn't really 'belong'. But I could be very wrong there. I'm still in shock. Your story is so good! I was almost crying at one point and when Hall gets ahold of Duo my face couldn't have been more than 2 inches from the computer screan! You are a VERY talented writer. |
Reviewed By: BloodRaevynn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I enjoyed this thuroughly! |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was reeeally really good. I hope you do more stories cuz you are a great writer.
Tobe |
