| "The 8th Millenium Item" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 10:55 CST
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I have no idea what you could write, but I don't wanna kiss Yami---I wanna kiss Bakura--the Yami Bakura!!! ^_~ You could have a dream sequence...you know, to Makarri's Yami's past of something... Bakura4ever!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sab On: December 29, 2002 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS AS GOOS AS THE ORIGINAL T.V SHOW |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm. So you have writer's block! *shudders* The horror.
Ideas, ideas. You could tell us who the creepy new student really is...or you could have him attack Makarri and Yugi saves her or something...I don't know if this'll help but oh well. I hope you get over the writer's block soon. I really like this story. Bye. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I still say you should tortue Kaiba. Hehe. Anyway, once again you've posted a really awesome chapter. I'm glad you didn't discontinue this story. Please post again soon. Bye.
^____^ |
Reviewed By: animegirl0 On: December 17, 2002 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! WHAT A INTERESTING STORY, I PERSONALLY GIVE IT A 10! WOW, HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT! PLEASE DON'T DISCONTINUE THIS STORY, IT'S TERRIFIC, AND I JUST HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO MAKARRA AND YAMI! THIS STORY ROCKS! IT'S MYSTERIOUS AND ROMANTIC, AND IT'S DRIVING ME INSANE NOT KNOWING WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!! BUT WOW, DO YOU KNOW HOW TO WRITE! THIS STORY IS FAB! IT IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 08:29 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* /her and her 2 new found muses parading around to a marching band with a banner that said "Kaiba 4 torture"/
*YamiPP* 0.0' AM I THE ONLY SANE ONE?????
*HikariPP&AibouPP* ^_^ Yep.
*YamiPP* -_- I thought so. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 09:34 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong, Hikari, Yami & AibouPP* JJJJJJJJOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY!!!! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 09:33 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* plz, you wouldn't discontinue this story.
*YamiPP* She would.
*AibouPP* Oh, yeah.
*HikariPP* Yep, she would.
*pingpong* /glares/ Shut up. /To YG710/ That last chappie was a good one because the way Makarri and Makarra tend to dodge each other when asking questions, like in real life. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh please don't stop writing this story cause no one else is reviewing it. I wanna know what's gonna happen to Makkari and everyone! (I also wanna see Kaiba get tortured! Hehe=) )
Someone else better review or else I'll...or else I'll do something=P What happened to everyone!
Anyway, please keep writing this story. Please pretty please. *Uses the cute face of death.* |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DID YA HAVE TO HAVE A CLIFFHANGER!!!
*Takes a deep breath and calms down.* Its okay I do that sometimes to. Anyway, nice chapter. I wonder what the name of Makarra's killer is though... Please post again soon. Bye. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 08:36 CST
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*pingpong* /fake deep voice. cloak swirls aroung her/ I am the murderer. /laughs as cruelly as can manage/ hahahahaha, hahahahaha!
*YamiPP* /slaps forehead/ I'm outta here, this is too embarrasing. [to pingpong] /yelling/ Do you have to let everyone out there know that you're crazy? /disappears into the Orb of Pharohs, pingpong's Item protector/ |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again. Another cool chapter. I hope you post another one soon. Bye. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: November 20, 2002 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty sweet fanfic here! I hope Yugi and this girl get together! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* Neat story!
*YamiPP* /pouts/ Yami Yugi was mine...
*pingpong* I thought you like Yami Bakura. /grins wickedly/ Oh well, It was a great story and you should post more soon. YamiPP is just cranky. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. Great story so far. Makarri sounds like an intesting new character. Post another chapter soon. Bye. |
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