| "Nothing Left" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this one the 2e time now and I noticed now that at the beginning you quote something Yami said. But I guess there are only few people who could have puzzled that together in time (I certainly couldn't) Anyway, your a great author, very descriptive indeed. I liked the way you gave away that it was Yami and not Yugi
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 07:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crap i thought yugi was dying! never thought yami would...
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Reviewed By: Bay On: February 17, 2003 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! I did not see that one coming. I thought that it was Yugi. Good Job. |
Reviewed By: ZellDincht [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 00:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay... very good description but suicide? |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 08:44 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* He deserved death! /laughing evilly/
*YamiPP* Alright, the embalmers are all ready to begin!
*pingpong* /still laughing evilly/
*YamiPP* Aibou and I are in agreement, one of those few times, and say continue! |
Reviewed By: Ayrrie On: November 17, 2002 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
erm...first fic i've ever seen where Yami commits suicide.....good job. |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't really see where you'd go from this. Maybe everyone's reactions to Yami-kun's death? (Especially Anzu. Bwahahahahahaha. ^.~) Can't wait for the update! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 21:45 CST
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I can't really see where you'd go from this. Maybe everyone's reactions to Yami-kun's death? (Especially Anzu. Bwahahahahahaha. ^.~) Can't wait for the update! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: November 16, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI I read your other story also and liked it alot.
You can use my original character Keora L. Kaiba in your stories if u want. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 16, 2002 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a feeling it was Yami, especially when the other person entered the room and was crying. I figured the other person was Yugi, so the one talking had to be Yami. That was really sad though. Why did you decide to do a sucide fic? |
Reviewed By: miraitrunksluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so heart-wrenching *sniffs*
I must say, the writing quality is excellent and very descriptive I congratulate you on a job well done...... yaaayyyyyyy |
