| "Leaving Nerima" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Kii On: November 18, 2002 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy the start if this fic. You have a good idea and grasp of the characters just try to keep them more IC. Example would be Akane. I know for the fic you needed a reason for them not to get together and the trust issue is very valid. That was a great idea. There is also some psychologicle issues that girl has to deal with. But you made her a little to extreme on the Ranma bashing side. Other than that, wonderful job! |
Reviewed By: Kii On: November 18, 2002 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy the start if this fic. You have a good idea and grasp of the characters just try not to keep them more IC. Example would be Akane. I know for the fic you needed a reason for them not to get together and the trust issue is very valid. That was a great idea. There is also some psychologicle issues that girl has to deal with. But you made her a little to extreme on the Ranma bashing side. Other than that, wonderful job! |
