| "The Center Of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Little confussing
Reviewed By: Dancing_Kitsune On: July 12, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start fer a fic, thou the way it's written is a little confussing. The Underlining that is a little mixed up is the problem. You should try to use spacing inbetween paragraphs and speakers. Also, it's be easier to read with the " marks, seeing how you accidentally underlined actions instead of speaking parts at times. But ether way, it's a good start. I like it.I can't wait fer when you post your next chapter, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice ficc expect who are the couples cuz! Izzy 16 Mimi 17 1/2 wrong Izzy 17 Mimi17 or Izzy17 and Mimi17 1/2 rite.. Peace out Koumi-Loc fan foe Life
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Reviewed By: innocent_asassin On: July 04, 2004 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
UWAAAAN!!! U not continuing! Please! Onegai shimasu! I`ll teach you Japanese! Just Please continue!
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Reviewed By: inoccent_asassin On: April 08, 2004 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww...please continue....onegai!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurok On: November 16, 2002 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job, please continue |
Reviewed By: Me On: January 03, 2003 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on continue ITS SOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!POOR TAI-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
