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| "Crowned Evil" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Jady!
Yes, you're wright, you have a warped mind for which you are probably proud of. lol First off, nice. The portrayal of Vegeta was very nice, and the end was espcially appropriate. I liked how you blamed Kakarott for everything. I mean, look what he did over the years.... All those--failures. Espcecially in my own story. ^_~
Now, I usually don't go for depressing, this-stoyr-has-no-moral-value-to-it types. However, this did have a hint of it. I just--it was hopeless, and to me, there is always hope. I'm glad Gohan isn't alone, that Piccolo is there. Gohan is, however, alone in his mind, and that is sad.
I'm also glad you kept Vegeta alive. Perhaps he took a ship and the Hell out of--Hell. That would be the smart thing. Then again, Vegeta wasn't very smart in this fic.
If I find anymore stories of yours without incest, ^_~ I'll be sure to read them | Reviewed By: Sailor Vegeta and Sailor Galaxia On: March 14, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the greatest fanfics we've ever read. origionl cool. we like that. very sad alot of realistic scenes.we cried | Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: February 09, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! So sad and angsty, but so good! Its original too! I love it and I know Mikana loves it too! Keep writing! | Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: February 13, 2003 18:39 CST
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Jady the end was so, so, so, *trying to remember the word* GOOD! It was sad, but it was like so cool, like everything would go right in the world yet it told the reader what would have happened if Gohan hadn't overcame his grief. All in all I loved it and I know Mikana did. | Reviewed By: stupid kid 04 On: January 05, 2003 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this fanfiction.net... could easly kill the people behimd the ban though... whatever... | Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: November 16, 2002 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's deactivated but who cares. I agree with you fanfiction is becoming a bitch. I enjoyed it the when I read it on fanfiction and I am enjoying it more now. Keep up the good work.
See ya! |
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