| "To the Stronger" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: xotakux On: August 14, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy to read a new chapter of your story!!!Please give us more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 09:07 CDT
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Holy crap, a new chapter!!! *faints* No, really, I am quite happy about the update. I'm glad you're still working on this, but let's try to update more than once a year, hmmm? ^_^
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Reviewed By: kanoko On: July 26, 2004 07:05 CDT
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wow, I think it´s great that you updated... hopefully the next chapter doen´t take as long ^-^ I loved the chapter by the way and I hope Brolly as well as Ani get their asses kicked by Vegeta- would be nice! :)
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 09:01 CDT
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I can't wait till Vegeta just tweaks out and beats Ani to a pulp. Hmmm, maybe he should give him to Brolly...paybacks a bitch. |
Reviewed By: otaku On: July 31, 2003 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sorry for little Vegeta's mental state.hope someone will help him soon! |
Reviewed By: otaku On: July 04, 2003 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a new chapter,I'm so happy!!!
Don't worry for us,we'll be waiting patiently for wathever you have in store for us!!! |
Reviewed By: otaku On: February 24, 2003 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you have decided to give us another chapter! I love this story so much,and please,please more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohh, poor Vegeta! I hope he ends up kicking Ani's royal butt!! Please write some more soon, I'm dying to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: otaku On: December 09, 2002 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like yoru story so far and hope to see a new chapter soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is turning out good keep it up |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story I like it a lot keep up the graet work |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: December 02, 2002 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! There might be a V/B pairing.. which I think is great seeing as they're my fav straight couple... then again it could be V/G, V/R or even V/P *hey it could happen* well, Vegeta did stare at Piccolo...
Thank you very much for putting the ages down! *is no longer confused... for the time being anyway @_@*
This ficcie is on a roll baby!! A good one ^_^ so keep it up!! *i knew there'd be trouble brewing... but this time (pro-human, pro-saiya-jin) it won't be his fault*
*takes a sip of her freshly brewed coffee* Thanx for updating! It made my day ^_^
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 29, 2002 05:38 CST
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I have a request to make!! Could you please do a little section before chapter four with the ages of the characters please! Its just that I like to know the ages and I know that you've included a few... but I tend to get confused *which happens quite a lot @_@* *nervous laughter*
Thanx! |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is sooo cool
whats going to happen i need to know
will the twins find out what happens to vegeta?
or will bardock or maby bulma?
whats going to happen at school
it's very unfair to keep me hangin like this (jokes)
write like the wind |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 20:35 CST
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you know this story is going better and better.
i love the way we you have acting bardock, vegeta and the twins raditz and kakarotto.
please update soon |
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