| "To the Stronger" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: otaku On: December 09, 2002 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like yoru story so far and hope to see a new chapter soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is turning out good keep it up |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story I like it a lot keep up the graet work |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: December 02, 2002 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! There might be a V/B pairing.. which I think is great seeing as they're my fav straight couple... then again it could be V/G, V/R or even V/P *hey it could happen* well, Vegeta did stare at Piccolo...
Thank you very much for putting the ages down! *is no longer confused... for the time being anyway @_@*
This ficcie is on a roll baby!! A good one ^_^ so keep it up!! *i knew there'd be trouble brewing... but this time (pro-human, pro-saiya-jin) it won't be his fault*
*takes a sip of her freshly brewed coffee* Thanx for updating! It made my day ^_^
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 29, 2002 05:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I have a request to make!! Could you please do a little section before chapter four with the ages of the characters please! Its just that I like to know the ages and I know that you've included a few... but I tend to get confused *which happens quite a lot @_@* *nervous laughter*
Thanx! |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is sooo cool
whats going to happen i need to know
will the twins find out what happens to vegeta?
or will bardock or maby bulma?
whats going to happen at school
it's very unfair to keep me hangin like this (jokes)
write like the wind |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
you know this story is going better and better.
i love the way we you have acting bardock, vegeta and the twins raditz and kakarotto.
please update soon |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 28, 2002 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi!! Poor Vege-chan *huggles even more* You've done an excellent job of portraying the emotiions of an abused child, we did a little about it in English and its a very horrible thing!! Like I said before you better have a nice happy ending for this fic!!
Plus it'll be iteresting to see what happens when Vegeta heads to school... no doubt he'll get into some trouble... unintentionly or not!
And by the way Bardocks going, hes gonna lose his temper sooner or later!! And he'll feel like such an ass if they ever find out water that EVIL, EVIL king has been doing!! *death to that bastard*
I'll review when you do more!! Good luck and happy writing!!
Winged Revenge |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 28, 2002 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHH!! ANGST!! I'm not much for the incest implied *hates that sort of thing* so you better make that nasty Ani of Vegeta's pay and pay dearly *huggles chibi V*
I like the whole twin thing about Kakkarot and Radditz! That's sweet!
*is off to read chapt1* this way you get more reviews! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 03:15 CST
Comment/Review:
*nodnod* The sort of bashing & demoralizing of self-esteem are classic techniques of abusers... the more worthless a victim feels the more power the abuser has. Nice so far, looking forward to the rest.... *holds out hope for some G/V action.... maybe even G/V/R, ya never know!* |
Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Luv it !!! Write more soon It's a great Fic i cant wait till read the next Chapter |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
what if kakarott hiding the fact that he is a super saiyajin to avoid get forcing to be the kings mate and strenghten the royal bloodline (i don't now how, maybe male pregnancy or gene science)and vegeta find out his secret. what would happend |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really nice no great. kakarott and raddyatwins that is wreid. they don't look like twins, but i don't mind. i only hope kakarott is as usually the strongest and goes by time kicking the ass of the king for poor little vegeta. please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: December 08, 2002 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay!! Brolly is in the fic!! He's my third favourite Saiya-jin!!*After Vegeta and Goku* *swoons* And he's definitely the bully type *such a loner* but he always looks so sad* Unless he's killing something O.O;;*
And it looks like the first day of school went better for Vegeta than I expected *how nice ^_^* I still love this fic so keep up the good work!!! ^_^
Plus... it would be nice if Vegeta got together with that Saiya-jin girl with his moms name... I've read WAY to many B/V fics and they just all seem a little dull now... and predictable... *thats just my opinion ^_^* But I luv this fic anyway... now matter what the pairings ^_^
Bye!!
Winged Revenge |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting angle on the whole "Everybody goes to High School togehter" scenario. I like the characterizations and scenes. I think the bits about Vegeta wanting Bulma's good opinion for inexplicable reasons is a bit... eh... shallow (Sorry! ^_^') but the introduction of Daikon has potential to add a nice new dynamic to the Bulma/Vegeta relationship. Keep it up! |
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