| "Terrible Things to Waste" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: MeatLips [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! I'm glad you finally were able to finish this chapter. It seemed to be getting a bit hairy there for awhile, but you pulled through. I was glad to help you any way I could. Since you made me privy to some of your future plot points, I'm extremely excited to see what happens next. I'd share some of those points here, but I don't believe anyone else has the proper security clearance. :-P I look forward to the next chapter, and hopefully you can help me get my own stuff back on track!
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Title: Long wait
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 19:59 CDT
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1.5 years between updates? All the same it was worth the wait as the plot moved forward. Many different influences being pulled in here and I cannot object to Setting Sun by the Chemical Brothers. It's a brilliant track and seems to inspire a few people. Tracer got free and Nihil got free. I wonder which is the more dangerous? Though of the two Nihil has a much better personality than Halebit. Kidding. How can anyone ignore Halebit's obviously wonderful traits and characteristics? But who will get the sword. So many questions. Thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 20:32 CDT
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So much happening in this chapter. Loved the Halebit beginning. Hehehe. And you managed to get Cindy in a bikini! That world you created, yeah, interesting. Awaiting the next installment, but while I wait I might read this chapter a few more times, just the enjoy it again.
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Title: Right
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 02:56 CDT
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Nauisica? What other ones are you going to pull out? You've split everyone up nicely. Mmmm. Darien showing a darker side is good. Missed Tracer, him being unconscious and all. Let's see where you take this next. Thanks for the dedication.
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Title: Exciting
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:48 CDT
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To quote you "I am curious, what are you going to do for the next act?" Finally finished it. Some interesting concepts and for a moment I even thought Cindy might have a chance, but then you twisted it, you twisted person. So, next?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 03:14 CDT
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To quote the last line, "Great. Just Great." What a sad end to a date. Poor Serenity. I like the interaction between your OC's. That makes this story for me.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 04:20 CDT
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I l;iked chapter 2. The plot is coming together nicely and I'm interested in seeing where you take it. Gratuitous nudity is always fun and again some good one liners.
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 18:28 CDT
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Okay. I've read the first two chapters and I took into account what you said, but I feel a bit out of my depth. I have no knowledge of SM (heh heh, I mean Sailor Moon). So far, yeah interesting, and I will read more. Some good one liners and sly humour present.
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Title: Pause
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's taking me a long while to get through this. ^_^; But I love the idea of different 'dimensions' to explain the Usagi/Serena name switches. ^_^; I'm pausing here for the night so I can sleep, but will continue tomorrow! Nice job btw, I'll have a more indepth review when I actually finish. And these chapters are freaking GIGANTIC!
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Reviewed By: MeatLips [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this fic... EPIC. When you left a review for my story, I naturally had to go read yours :-) Good stories are always based on the reader itching with the desire to read what happens next... Jeez man! What happens next????
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Reviewed By: Setsu-P On: February 17, 2008 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still say this is a fan-EPIC, B. But then, I know too much about it. You have officially been pimped out on DA, as of this afternoon. Tell V that if she does make you sleep on the couch, it kills creative brain cells. We need you to retain those. SRSLY. The writing, characterization and plot in these latest revisions really show me how far you've come since this project started. Terrible Things is, in a way, your baby, and it shows. Good job =) Remember, I'm signed on for cover art for the rest of the story arcs as well, and will be ready and waiting to ride herd on as many commas as you feel need finding. In short... OMG THS FIK ROXXX!!! RITE MOAR l0LOLOL!!!11!1one!1
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Reviewed By: Moongal On: October 24, 2007 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! *Jumps around in circle for a few minutes then bemoans because there is still more to wait for* Ive never had a chapter dedicated to me before, but I love the power conflicts this story presents and I cant wait to see how everything will turn out for everyone involved. I love the complicated twists of this story, dont you give up on it or I might cry....or go insane....or both....
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Reviewed By: Moongal On: September 20, 2007 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear god continue PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: May 29, 2007 15:59 CDT
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a soundtrack eh? i'll reserve my copy now. lol. well, serena is pretty screwed it would seem. but what's new? and no one knows who to trust anymore...sounds like a reality tv show. and grandpa is dead. *determining whether or not it's a huge loss* well he did add some comic relief now and then, especially in season one. yup, stll lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 15:51 CST
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is that it? it's good, but i'd like to see more.
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