Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Start for a fic. You should have more action in it though. The chapters were short. You had no speeling mistakes though. Keep Writing! |
