| "Simple but Complicated" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 18, 2002 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I didn't think it was confusing though... /\__/\ |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: November 18, 2002 08:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Overall a great story!! I luved it! Yami/Anzu(Tea) are my fav pairing ^_^ I did get a little bit confused at some points(like when Tea's hands were tied up, I couldn't really see how she was going to fall~_~) Other than that, great fic! I wish you would've streched this out to be a multi chapter fic!! It would've been awesome! Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 17, 2002 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a little confusing and the ending was corny, but otherwise it was an okay story. An interesting idea at least. |
