| "Come Undone" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: The Last Samurai On: November 25, 2004 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude u should publish lemons more often, this was damn good!! Aoshi got sex thats always a + :D
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love Aoshi & Misao to death. They look like a perfect couple together
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Title: wow..........
Reviewed By: Keimei On: April 10, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.........wow.......... (transaltion.............very good......NEED MORE....MUST HAVE MORE........)
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Reviewed By: Pockee On: February 26, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! A tasteful and well-written lemon! You should publish more of your work :).
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Title: Serenity-chan
Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Very pretty. You have a lot of talent. Now please put up the next chapter in the main fic!!!(er... the part this is exerpted from. I don't know what the word for it is...) *desperate pacing and crazed muttering*
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