| "Lucky" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 02, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Okaaayy...that has got to be the shortest PWP I have ever read... Really. Um yeah. |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist On: November 19, 2002 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Blinks* Damn, did I miss it? *Blinks again* Ken's ass isn't going to feel "lucky" in the morning. OUCH!! |
Reviewed By: Kitarou_Nakago On: November 18, 2002 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ano.... A readable fic, but rather PWPish (which is okay, but... wouldn't have minded being told that before reading this...)
My biggest problem with the story was how... short it was. Not even 200 words, and we've already got Ken naked. And talk about a quickie... 90 words and the act is done ^^;
I like sex.. but not when it's undeveloped. :S |
Reviewed By: Suzanne On: November 18, 2002 08:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I find it very cute. Please make another one, cause your good in it
Greetings Suzanne |
