| "Where Sunrays can't reach you" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Seth Sefarina On: August 12, 2004 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic....If you would please pretty please with sugar, honey and everything else sweet on top continue...anyway. It's a great fic. I love the way you portray Zechs is really nice. Masculine yet effeminate. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaaaa??!! This can't be the end! It just can't be! Poor poor Milliardo. Bad enough he had to be saddled with a name like Milliardo (Sorry, sounds too much like Leonardo which brings to mind Titanic and the Man in the Iron Mask...*shiver*) but now he's gone nutzo too? INJUSTICE! Very rare to read a Treize x Milliardo fic. Usually they're paired off with Chang Wufei, Une, or Noin. Excellently (is that a word?) done! Please...more!! *Turns Duo eyes on you*
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Reviewed By: cookieb On: April 18, 2004 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You have to write more this is one of the best fics I've ever read. You can't leave it there, please write more!
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Reviewed By: Akira_Khushrenada_Merquise On: June 09, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
But come on...... please don't let my Mommy be insane!!!!!! PLEASE!!! ;_;
I don't want my Daddy to be alone..........
P.S: Really good..... your a great writer sooooo.... keep up the good work! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just an example of good fanfiction, which is rare in this fandom.
And I really want to see the end. |
Reviewed By: Lita On: February 28, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I can't wait till u continue this! Is he really insane? |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 26, 2003 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Zechs in shock or is he really insane? Cause if he is just in shock Treize can find a way to snap him out of it. But on the other hand if you leave him insane Treize ill end up with Colonel Une. There was that remark about he being beautiful. Poor Zechs. I hope he is okay. Let Treize make it all better please! This is a fantastic story and it deserves to have a great ending, please let them live happily ever after! After all they have been through they deserve it and no one knows it better than you!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Ken's sin On: February 16, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story for a while now and though I don't often review (bad me!) I just have to comment that I think this is a wonderful, wonderful story. I was not even a 13x6 fan, but you made me one. It's just a great love story full suspense and unexpected twists and turns.
I love your writing a lot and it's clear that you have a lot of creativity in your mind to think up this story. The last chapter was so full of angst and the cliffhanger makes me crazy!
What is going to happen to poor Milliardo? There really isn't anything more evil that could happen to him, don't you think?^_^ |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 23:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I agree with the fact that you should have more reviews for such a great story, but then again maybe Talyssa is right in saying that 13x6 isn't as popular as it used to be. Seems to be an overload of the 'unusual' pairings lately, don't you think? Well, I always liked my 'old-fashined' pairings so 13x6x13 all the way!
Anywho, away from my musings on the pairings of GW shown in the fanfic folders across the net. I absolutely adore this story and it is going onto my favourites list. I love lemons as much as the next person (assuming they love a good lemon too) but there's nothing wrong with a plot once in a while either. This is the first pre-anime 13x6 fic that I has a plot and doesn't contradict what the anime has stated about Zechs and Treize's pasts. It's also one of the few 13x6 fics that I like since I find not very many people can keep them in character.
A few comments on the story so far:
- I hate Zachary ^.^; I don't look too kindly on NC
- I love chapter 7 and 9 and 12 =3 Lemons with feeling
- The kiss in chapter 4 made my teeth rot. As seductive as it was it was, it was also unbearably sweet (in the good way)
- Otto and Zechs is... well, it is something. I know people aren't as adverse to the pairing as I am but I'm a firm believer that Zechs should be paired up with only two people... three including Noin (if I even liked anime het, that is)
- I don't like Zechs leaving Treize to go to outer space. It ruins the relationship being so far apart... though the saying does go 'absebce makes the heart grow fonder' so... maybe we'll be expecting another one of those soulful lemons soon, yes?
- I like how you portray the characters. Very much like how I have pictured them (except Zech's past but I never was one to want to dwell on the details losing parents so young).
I think that's about it seeing you have the rest of the story to go so I can write more later and this is the longest and most pointless review yet. The only thing I can say in critisism is to perhaps get a beta reader as there are a lot of mistakes in your writing. Small mistakes, sure, but I know for a fact that a beta reader can also help you greatly with organsing of ideas and such.
Right, off with me. This review is too long.
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: BloodRaevynn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this story immensely, I can't wait for the next chapter. Your spelling, however, _does_ need a little work. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 12, 2003 08:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL PERSON! (I don't really mean that) HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO ZECHS/MILLIARDO?! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO TRIEZE?! DON'T YOU DARE LET EITHER OF THEM DIE!!!! JUST GIVE THEM A HAPPY ENDING WITH LADY UNE COMING TO THE RESCUE TO SAVE THE BOTH OF THEM!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 05, 2003 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Believe me i would make the rating a 15 if i could. This story is absolutly fantastic and please please please write more soon you are driving m nuts with all this stuff! I hope your story has a happy ending. If it doesn't I think you're gonna get a lot of flames from everyone reading this story. INCLUDING ME! SO please please please please please please make it a happy ending where no more secrets are kept and they can live happily ever after together.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 16:55 CST
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heh. ^.^ I liked this chapter. it's...nice, I guess you could say. ^.^ I'm not sure HOW to describe it, exactly, but it was very good. ::grin:: ::wink:: |
Reviewed By: Alundra On: January 30, 2003 07:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is simply amazing. Angsty conflict, wonderful character description and an impossible love.
And the lemons are so yummy!
Please write more soon i am dying to know what's going to happen next. (Do I sense another lemon coming up?) |
Reviewed By: Robofetus0 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 00:06 CST
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You've got me hooked; I can't wait for more. |
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