| "HEATed up" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagomenesan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was verry good, congrats on ur first. hope u can make some more just as good as that.
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Reviewed By: jfandres On: September 15, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, I have to add something: I appreciate lemons, but this one is awfull. Get a plot or something to prevent this house of cards from collapsing. Immer wieder gern andere Leute mit ihrem Rat nerv* - Fely Aber es war dein Erstes Mal; also Übung macht den Meister --> Englisch ist nun mal nicht so einfach^^
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Reviewed By: jfandres On: September 15, 2005 16:51 CDT
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ger, aren't you?^^ The "ähm" gave you away. It's 'er..' or something along that line in English, if you intend to express embarassment.. Schönen Abend noch, deine Felicia I really appreciate lemons.^^
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Title: YAYYYY
Reviewed By: InuYashasGirl467 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care if you spelled a few things wrong.....IT WAS AWSOME!YAY!! OH PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! YAYYYYYY!!!
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Title: HEATed up
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is sooooo kawaii! The lemon was pretty good and had a cute ending. For your first Inuyasha fic, that was pretty awesome! I hope to read more of your lemony works. lol. ^-^ Tchao!
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Reviewed By: Nikki Inuyasha's girl On: July 20, 2005 16:26 CDT
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Awwwwwww. Taht was so cute and I love ur story! Hope to see another lemon from u.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 20:20 CDT
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it was good. although, near the end you say that Shippo's and Sango's yaws dropped. it should be jaws, not yaws. other than that it was great.
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Reviewed By: Inufan1109 On: March 14, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good! Not the best spelling but I've seen alot worse. Please write a sequal.
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: shoes On: February 09, 2005 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
you did pretty good
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Title: HEATed Up
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dragonling On: September 04, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the storey relley origanal. well I like it and dont think u need to change it but if u are not happey with id change it as long as it stayes bacicley the same Im good
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Title: ?????
Reviewed By: unvoicedsigner(aka)moqllynangel@aol.com On: August 24, 2004 01:53 CDT
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i liked the story very good consitering its your first one in english but iwas woundering whaats you normal lagauge?
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Reviewed By: arielldsfljf On: August 05, 2004 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, but a little rushed.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 00:36 CDT
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This was really good especially since its your first in English too !!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 19:48 CDT
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That was a great lemon. Keep up the good work.
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