| "Paradigm Shift" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kreshnya On: May 06, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my..... I hope you're planning on doing more of this fic, I LOVE IT. ::giggles:: and I simply LOVE the outfit for the christmas thing that Hokuto made Subaru wear! And PLEASE don't give it the same ending, I think I might die if you do ;___;
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Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 11, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, wierd chicks! I have a friend who draws clothes, but I draw costumes and write fanfiction. We make quite the pair. Maybe I could bribe her-I mean get her to do a collaboration with me.
Anywho, on with the story. I was a bit more detailed than the last chapter, but I got kinda boring during the part with the exorcism or whatever that thing was. It was interseting, but I was kinda snoozing during the middle of it. |
Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 11, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! I liked this story a lot because it was one of the good X stories, and I could actually relate to it. I have a sibling who is exactly like Hokuto-chan, but it's sorta the other way around; I'm the girl and he's the boy. Whodda thunk that a boy could be as hyper-active as Hokuto-chan and as fashion-wise (or fashion-dense for my bro) as her.
I thank the heavens everyday that he has never made me a Halloween outfit...though there was this one Christmas out fit... |
Reviewed By: jaya On: March 18, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say it's hard to find TB fanfics, but it is even harder to find fanfiction of this quality.
I really hope you continue with this fic. |
Reviewed By: Avihenda On: March 12, 2003 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was so fun to read. I usually don't enjoy AU fic on X that much but this was so good. I hope your write more! |
Reviewed By: Kayla On: February 01, 2003 06:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very well-written. I'd like to see Seishirou's personality developed more. What is he thinking? Wish you could deviate from canon more... if it ends the same way that would be terrible. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: passionova On: November 19, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a wonderful and throughly enjoyable fic so far..Kudos to you!..I loved the way you introduced the fic for keeping the characters as close to cannon as possible..and your wonderful desciptive writing style..IM HOOKED! |
