| "The Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Sinu-yasha On: March 14, 2003 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue to write!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 12:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I've always, liked these reversal role fics. There's not very many out there.
This should be really interesting, update soon.
Bulma's being a bit too nice, but I know that's because she wants something.
You can bash Yamcha as much as you like, next time bash him for me. I think he such a JERK.
Waiting........................... |
Reviewed By: Zemmy On: November 19, 2002 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is VERY enjoyable story. A nice twist to the typical A/U B/V's I've read. It's almost like Bulma and Vegeta simply switched genders, if not for a few subtle differences. I really enjoy it. You've made a few notable grammar/spelling mistakes, and some of the sentences are a bit awkward, but that's easily gone around. Hence the rating. I hope you keep going! |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great start! I've never seen Bulma and Vegeta's positions reversed and it's very entertaining thus far. Hilarious too! Three cheers for yamcha bashing! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 19, 2002 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves* me again... just a bit of CC here, I think Bulma's acting a bit to nice! Especially if she's a Saiya-jin with a tortured past. Then again! This is AU but I would have thought her to be meaner!
Great chapter! I'm glad to see it was a bit longer than the other one! Good luck with writing more!! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: November 19, 2002 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! The first chapters very intriguing ^_^ I love AU's especially this type!! I just love the idea of Vegeta as a weak little ningen! *he's such a hottie*
I don't know why! But its nice to see something different ^_^ *is off to read the next chapter* |
