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| "Saiyuki Outside" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: sanzo-san On: May 27, 2004 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story.Hope you will write more
| Reviewed By: sanzo-san On: March 25, 2004 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update more...
| Reviewed By: hey mama On: March 20, 2004 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was an entertaining read...but i agree with jials, for someone like sanzo to fall in love so easily and quickly is kinda hard to blieve....i wanna noe wut happens to ayokishi when he finds sanzo n shyirin...and shyirin is perphaps a little too rash in her decisions, like wanting to commit suicide...and she's well, a little too good to b true...especially only at 15 yrs old...but all in all, thumbs up, behind u all the way...
| Reviewed By: dragon__GiRLL* On: March 20, 2004 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool loved it keep up the good work:)
| Reviewed By: Jials On: March 02, 2004 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..quite a nice piece of work to read, and the sentence flow is well-structured and smooth, not to mention that it has a fast-paced plot and doesn't drag oooon and oooooon like other romance fics. Not bad, but you might have to cut out the Mary-Sueishness a litle bit. Shyirin is a very interesting female character, but she seems a little too perfect to be real. I'm not saying you should change her completely, but IMHO she needs to make a few more mistakes before your readers can truly accept her. When reading from the first chapter I also noticed that Sanzo seemed to fall in love pretty quickly for someone with his cold, indifferent personality. That seemed a little OOC, but nonetheless, all the other characters seem to be just like they are on screen and manga, so I have no other bones to pick with it. All in all, an enjoyable story but could still use a little more touching up. ps. sorry if I sound like I kutuk nonstop cuzzie=P but I guess I'm the sort who's brutally honest and straightforward when it comes to reviewing fics I like. Keep up the good work ne...I'll be reading..
| Reviewed By: Jials On: March 02, 2004 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..quite a nice piece of work to read, and the sentence flow is well-structured and smooth, not to mention that it has a fast-paced plot and doesn't drag oooon and oooooon like other romance fics. Not bad, but you might have to cut out the Mary-Sueishness a litle bit. Shyirin is a very interesting female character, but she seems a little too perfect to be real. I'm not saying you should change her completely, but IMHO she needs to make a few more mistakes before your readers can truly accept her. When reading from the first chapter I also noticed that Sanzo seemed to fall in love pretty quickly for someone with his cold, indifferent personality. That seemed a little OOC, but nonetheless, all the other characters seem to be just like they are on screen and manga, so I have no other bones to pick with it. All in all, an enjoyable story but could still use a little more touching up. ps. sorry if I sound like I kutuk nonstop cuzzie=P but I guess I'm the sort who's brutally honest and straightforward when it comes to reviewing fics I like. Keep up the good work ne...I'll be reading..
| Reviewed By: Jade Phoenix On: February 15, 2004 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fanfic to be very entertaining,intruiging and addictive. I love the fact that the cold, brooding and complicated Genjo Sanzo finally opening up his heart to a woman and we all can get to see the human male side of him in action. ^.^ I hope the writer will continue with this story as I love to see how the Saiyuki guys come to terms with their friendships as well as their relationships with other people, namely women.
| Reviewed By: sanzo-fan On: February 05, 2004 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fanfic.please update more.i've been read from part 1 and part 2 chapter 1 to chapter 28 fury flame...please update more!!!!!!!
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