| "Dragonball V: A World Both Familiar and Foreign" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: barrs789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this as well as your "Only in your eyes am i worthy" fic. Please update these soon (but don't rush them of course, I just really can't wait to read them) My favorite thing about your fics are that the characters aren't really changed too much at all and it all just flows very well. ^_^
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Title: Hey! Don't stop writing!
Reviewed By: Little Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the most part, I liked your fanfiction better than the show! In such an unrealistic world, your story seems... slightly more realistic. (btw, I adore Piccolo, so I'm really glad you didn't screw him up.) I have one problem. The first time, I thought for a sec that they were going to have a girl for lunch. The typo threw me way off until you mentioned sneezing. The girl's name is LAUNCH. :P If it will get you back in the mood to write, try going to amv.com (anime music videos) and looking up dragonball z and cucumber. It's really funny, and there's a second one too. Please write soon. Don't abandon this story!
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Reviewed By: a piissedd of person On: August 11, 2004 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: hawkeye307 On: May 20, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTUIE!!!!
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Reviewed By: StealthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written, but needs a little work on the grammar. I throughly enjoyed reading it though. Hope to see some new chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: October 16, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic I can't wait for the next chapter but please please please please revive Vegeta he and Bulma are my favorite characters plllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssseeee.
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Reviewed By: Shaka On: October 16, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I can't wait for an update!! Gohan better start training his ass soon, or else! lol
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Reviewed By: videl On: August 11, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please!!!!!!!!
i love it its really cool! |
Reviewed By: dave On: April 08, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally an update geez keep it going |
Reviewed By: eljoebla On: February 27, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg u dont get enough reviews i really like this fic keep it going |
Reviewed By: jowe On: January 06, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep the story going its great |
Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: December 27, 2002 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please revive Vegeta pretty pretty please I'm begging you please revive Vegeta. |
