| "Ranma in the Warring States Period!" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha fanfatic On: February 10, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loooooooved it and i can't wait for the next chapter just answer me two thing willl Inuyasha and Ranma become friend and will Ranma find out about Inuyasha's past oh and will Inuyasha turn human you know with the new moon?? |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I like how ya wrote that chapter....
Even if Ranma could take down a half dragon, (Im guessing this is before the 36th Manga)
He should be about level with Inu- Yasha, but had Inu- Yasha actually trained under some one Like Genma....hell even under someone like Kuno, Ranma wouldnt stand a chance.
please make this a Ranma and Akane be a couple in the fic please |
Reviewed By: Lorraine On: November 21, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plese write aother one or make another chpter in this story |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, this story sounds like it's going to be great! I love inuyasha/ranma cross overs! are you goign to make inuyasha and ranma friends or foes? both combos work great! tho, if i'm allowed some constructive criticism (please don't take as an insult), it doesn't seem like you have a real plot going yet, and you've written three chapters already. i mean, you have goings on and such, but no real conflict to be settled. you said you're not going to make this a kagome/ranma pairing, but to create some conflict you could still have a very jealous dog demon ^^
Mara |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 19, 2002 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is great! Who are planning to pair Ranma with and no of those four morans(Akane,Shampoo,Ukyo and crazy sister of Kuno)should get Ranma. Please write chapter 2 of this fic very quickly! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good! i luv dis story! please write a new chapter soon! |
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