| "Ranma in the Warring States Period!" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I realize this is a moot point, but Happi's mirror. It's called the Nan Ban mirror, and I think it works by crying into it and wanting to be in a specific time. Excellent Miroku joke, though I thought Inuyasha didn't understand Ranma's explanation. And, the others brought up a good point, exactly where do you want to take this story? I gotta go. Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: 1inuyashafan On: August 02, 2004 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, see the enjoyment factor, see how it's ten, well thats as high as theyed let me go but it's really a 1000000000000000000000000000000/10! You have a really good story going here keep it up! please try to continue the story because i would love to see it finished! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zerotolerance On: July 10, 2004 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i read your story and it's awesome but you never mentioned when this is,if this is after the saffron incident than Ranma should be wiping the floor with inuyasha.And i saw in the reviews that people are basically saying a human can't be as strong as a demon that's bull.If that was true than bankotsu of the shinintai would have been flattened by inuyasha but he was even with inuyasha so don't listen to any of them i think you should make Ranma just as strong if not stronger than inuyasha.Remember Ranma's pride won't let anyone be better than him so he would train extra hard,i think you should do that by for example make him do push - ups with boulders. Or that he puts weights in his clothes.Well this my idea and if you're not going to use it for this story would you please consider using it for another.E - mail me at zerotolerance1@home.nl
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Reviewed By: Katanagirl9791 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got some many reveiws yet you do not update. It's been two years for God sakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You have to update or else something bad's gonna happen!! I SWEAR IT!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder if Ranma is related to Inu-Yasha.... The Hiryuu Shoten Ha is an amazon technique, but Ranma has been making it his own for such a long time... if he was of Inu-Yasha's bloodline then since he's never faced a Youkai before could be the reason it never showed. Also Most Youkai have hot Ki already, only more sophisticated ones keep a form of Cold Ki all the time.
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Reviewed By: The Original Heero's Bunny On: October 18, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bunny-lol, I LOVED IT!!! Update.... please?!! UPDATE!!! (attempts to strangel) Heero-IF you do that, he can't update. Bunny-(glares and releases) Update, NOW!!!! START TYPING!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING LOOKING AT THIS USELESS REVIEW?!!! Oh yeah, put it on ff.net since i don't go here very often!! In fact I had an account on here called Heero's Bunny.... But I forgot hte password....
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Reviewed By: Animefan4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update?
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Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all Ranma\Inu-Yasha fanfics, this has got to be one of the best of them all. Inu-Yasha is a Hanyou son of a Taiyoukai so his strength is alot due to his blood. Ranma's strength comes from the fact he was born and raised in a martial artists clan, and his father taught him such interesting techniques. In a strait out fight... Ranma could beat Inu-Yasha with his skills and endurance also his speed. While Inu-Yasha could beat him with his shear power and youkai and hunter senses. However, no one really uses that when they write their Inu\Ranma fics....instead they blend comidic elements from both animes, and make Ranma and Inu-Yasha equal in strength. Also I hope that the cannon parings stay true in this fic (Inu-Yasha\Kogome) (Ranma\Akane) Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all Ranma\Inu-Yasha fanfics, this has got to be one of the best of them all. Inu-Yasha is a Hanyou son of a Taiyoukai so his strength is alot due to his blood. Ranma's strength comes from the fact he was born and raised in a martial artists clan, and his father taught him such interesting techniques. In a strait out fight... Ranma could beat Inu-Yasha with his skills and endurance also his speed. While Inu-Yasha could beat him with his shear power and youkai and hunter senses. However, no one really uses that when they write their Inu\Ranma fics....instead they blend comidic elements from both animes, and make Ranma and Inu-Yasha equal in strength. Also I hope that the cannon parings stay true in this fic (Inu-Yasha\Kogome) (Ranma\Akane) Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ?#@2?! On: September 18, 2003 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice work!
keep on writing!
i'll be waiting for the next chapters! |
Reviewed By: inuficcrzy On: April 11, 2003 09:41 CDT
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this is cool! why isn't it on ff.net? it kicks! i'd love to see the two of them duke it out for real.
please write more on it soon! |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha fanfatic On: February 10, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loooooooved it and i can't wait for the next chapter just answer me two thing willl Inuyasha and Ranma become friend and will Ranma find out about Inuyasha's past oh and will Inuyasha turn human you know with the new moon?? PLEASE WRITE BACK AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP QUICKLY!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 18:57 CST
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great story, although im too tired to go into too many details. good luck on coming chapters |
Reviewed By: Xtreme Nuisance [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:58 CST
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OMG! THAT'S FUNNEH! MORE! PLZ AND TY! |
Reviewed By: Xtreme Nuisance [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:58 CST
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OMG! THAT'S FUNNEH! MORE! PLZ AND TY! |
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