| "Help From The Future" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Trunks girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fanfic, it's a bummer about the gay part though. Did you really have to make them gay? But still keep up the great work.
Trunks' girl. |
Reviewed By: Tobe On: January 02, 2003 17:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Well how about this...just pretend that I am a different person that is reviewing your story and then continue it because you got a review from two different people. Does that make sense? Hope so. Anyway thanks for the email. Helped me to understand it a little better. Well I got to go so if you deciede to write a sequel (which I think you should and add something about Goku and Vegeta in their or do a sidestory or something)email me. Thanks
Tobe |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok here's the thing...I really enjoyed reading this and I hope it continues but I had some trouble understanding it. Like the part about Trunks not knowing who Goten was. Does he look that different or something. Well anyway maybe I'm just not concentrating or something. Well anyway got to go.
Tobe |
