"The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: snoopy On: December 09, 2002 15:24 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I DONT USAULLY BEG but............
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!
:p |
Reviewed By: Monoko Hanyou On: December 08, 2002 23:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it. It was great. But of course any fan fictions with Inuyasha or Sesshomaru in them I like. But there was just something about this one that made me like it even more. ^_^ Great Job! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 21:19 CST Comment/Review: waaah why haven't you written more yet??? |
Reviewed By: Neko_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 22:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: ACK! You HAVE to write more!! You just can't leave us hanging like that! I think I might cry! Poor Sesshomaru... poor Kagome... *sigh* lol I get far to interested in these stories, but only cause they're great!! *Kitty Grin* |
Reviewed By: LazyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 18:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! I JUST LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!! I can't believe you except us to write in words how good it is -_-' this is going to be hard oO |
Reviewed By: gatta.melata On: December 06, 2002 17:26 CST Comment/Review: Poor Kagome...Damn, you are evil, you know.. |
Reviewed By: Anne-twilight On: December 03, 2002 13:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Shock* *froze for a moment* Why did you do that???
Are you killing us? Oh y did you end up chappy 8 like that? Did you know that this fic make me cry?
You'd better update soon.
Sess is on his normal self, arrogant and stoic, even kag, she is her normal self. The problem is she doen't have sex with her new friend right? Oh don't even bother. I love this even more.
Even your summary and other stories, but you made them one shot, I wish you have chapter 2.
Please update . . I like this, because it's sess/kag fic, and I like it though. You know, better put this on Fanfiction.net, I'm sure you'll have many reviews.
As always,
Anne-twilight |
Reviewed By: Casey On: December 02, 2002 17:37 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi! Whatever you did to the first chapter, it worked. I diddent have to scroll to the side at all. *looks arounds* Thank you for reading my reviw and actually answering it! *is impressed* I'm assuming your in...collage? I wish I had as much free time ^^''' *sighs* Anyway, I appriciate (and probably the other readers too) that you give up so much time (even if you say you have nothing better to do) And put so much effort into your writing. It's really turning into a worth-while fan-fic and I find myself checking if its up-dated at around 12:00 every evening (I think best at night so thats when I do most of my school work ^^;) Anyway, keep up the good work and continue to write! (Don't burn your self out though! Then you'll never be able to up-date ^.^) |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: December 02, 2002 17:25 CST Comment/Review: OMg i love this story it's the best and your style of writing is great too!!!!!!!! Please keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!Write more soon i'm dieing to find out what's going to happen!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catleya On: December 02, 2002 11:54 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hye there!
thanks for your mail, I've re-read the fic and I still enjoy it as much...(but I can't tell you the difference between the "updated" and "not updated" chapters, cause I don't have the first to compare.) so do not hesitate to mail me ...and I hope, really soon!! |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: December 01, 2002 17:46 CST Comment/Review: OMG i love this fanfic!!! I like inu/kag stories but this one tops them anyday!!!!! You must continue writing i can't wait to find out what happens at the end!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LazyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 23:43 CST Comment/Review: how do I get to your fan fic? I don't see the link. |
Reviewed By: karla On: November 30, 2002 15:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i enjoyed the fanfic alot actualy i check it every once in a while to see if it's been up dated i can't wait to see what happens next so try not to keep me in suspence! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nicole On: November 30, 2002 07:53 CST Comment/Review: Ah! Don't listen to Hmm. Keep writing! XD; You don't have to take breaks. ;) Love this story, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: November 28, 2002 00:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Wayyyyyyyy too off of touch with the show. it was original and... different. "B" |
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