| "Vegeta's Forgotten Family" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Feel your rath uh? What rath, you don't have what it takes. I really shouldn't be saying this because you know how to get a hold of me. Oops. I am sorry that I spelt your name wrong. I will correct it. |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: November 23, 2002 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Listen Karou, everything was the bom ( he he he)
but you spelled my name wrong in the first chapter and it is part my story. Other then that, the begining was super. And to think you didn't need my help ^_-
Continue writing... OR you'll feel my rath
PS write more of your book story. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 23, 2002 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey..what a great fic! keep going! I wanna know more on whats gunna happen! |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: December 06, 2002 16:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I HATE YOU! Don' tforget to mention Megumi's power or i will kill. you said you would post chaper 6 before i got on the internet? Well don't forget to tellour readers at home that i I mean megumi can read minds aswell, but can be detected(sp?) write more!!!
toodles ^_* |
Reviewed By: Megumi 10 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 19:44 CDT
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your such a dork. well now that you have the internet back you can continue wrighting. you now what, we havn't got anything accomplished and there are already like 17 chapters. sorry to all the readers that are wondering whats going to happen next but kaoru and I are working on a Rourin Kenshin story at the time and we have a HUGE writers block. Karou WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is a good ch 2 keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 22:22 CST
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A very good start for a fan fic keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: January 18, 2003 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
hello this is the co-writer here. You'll love what happens between Gohan and Megumi. Also Kaoru and Goten. Just keep reading and reviewing and we'll get it up in no time
^_^ toodles |
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