| "Tumultuous" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: OriginalSin1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply amazing. This was so believable, and one of the sexiest thing I've ever read. =3 Keep writing please, you're really good. ^^
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Reviewed By: SuzumeTori On: December 01, 2004 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Whooohoooo... now that's just HOT **drool** oioioi... supposedly, mild asphyxiation actually adds to sexual experiences.... I wouldn't know ^^;; Kinky, though. Breathplay is always an interesting addition... I love the miscommunication, though, and when Titus finally realizes that he ISN'T repremanding him, but trying to justify his feelings towards him.... I like it very muchly. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Viator On: January 06, 2004 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Everything a fic needs is here. Creativity and thought was put into this. Your ficton takes the characters' hearts and souls above and beyond. Don't stop writing! You're very good at it. The only thing that I think you should do is make a sequel!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 20:23 CST
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This is pretty damn good! I never really considered Auron and Tidus together... so this is awesome! I loved that whole blitzball underwater mouth-to-mouth-that-was-like-a-kiss thing. I so encourage you to write more. great lemon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good! I have just gotten in to being comfortable with these kinds of stories...and this pairing is one of the ones that started it! I love your characterization of both, even using some of their catch phrases. This was excellent and I hope that you will write more with this pairing! |
