| "I Like You . . . I Hate You . . . I Love You!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ssj8Gohan On: May 27, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its was goood, but u need 2 finish it |
Reviewed By: Ilean On: May 16, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! if i could i would give it more then a 10/10. EVERYONE this is a MUST read fic! SO READ IT!!!! Update soon i want to know what's going to happend next! T/P forever! :D |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I know is that I didn't like and I didn't hate. I loved it. Please write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: jezz On: January 05, 2002 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh finish it please it is soo good~ i really like it alot, this is such a great fic.
i've read tons of t/p fics but this is turning to be on of my faves! i just want to know what's going to happen so finish, or just write more as soon as you can! Keep it up!!! love it! |
Reviewed By: Sirus1987 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I chose a 10% on the style of the writing because I felt it was your original work, which I like to look for in a story. I also chose a 9% on the spelling and grammar because I found about one or two, no more misspelled words. Otherwise it was fine. I chose a 10% on Originality/Creativity because again, I felt it was your own orininal work and I thought it as creative. That's a good compliment from a journalist dear. Now on w/ the rest, I gave you an 8% on the Enjoyment Factor because I found it rather enjoying but it just stoped in middair. You should work on that. And I gave you a 9% on your Overall Rating because I liked it very much but rather disliked the middair stoping. But otherwise I really like it. I think that you should work hard and get on some of those tips. Who knows? Maybe if you try, you'll become a very exceptional writer!
P.S.Really work on finishing this mind you? I'm getting rather -er- impatient.
-Alexis Snell |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this! it's the first trunks/pan fic i've read! this is awesome, please write the next fic soon! |
Reviewed By: karena On: November 27, 2001 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how the story flows and is fluent. the plot, and story for that matter, i've seen before. i hope that you're the original author for this fic. and, i would certainly enjoy seeing how this fic is concluded. |
Reviewed By: KinkyMalinkie On: November 27, 2001 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking that ending part...but it makes me want to read the next part! hahaha- i liked that little line trunks had with the fire...that was classic...can't wait for your next part...it sounds like it's going to be interesting and entertaining! |
Reviewed By: Morgan On: October 08, 2001 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waaaaah, finish!! I hate unfinished fics!! |
Reviewed By: symone On: October 15, 2001 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this story on fanfiction.net. I thought it was a great story, but it wasn't completed. On here where "status" is, you have that it is completed. I was wondering where the rest of it is? Maybe I'm an idiot and haven't read something about where the rest of the story is, but I would love to see how it turned out. |
