| "Something Extraordinary" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 10, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease write as well with this one as you do with the others! thanks:) |
Reviewed By: Blood Raven On: December 04, 2002 03:08 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the best storyline i've seen so far for Vegeta and Bulma hooking up! Now hurry up and finish your next chapter I'm dying to read it!!! :D :D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: November 21, 2002 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad the scale only goes up to 10! That was great and I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Jen On: November 21, 2002 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 11:21 CST
Comment/Review:
A good start. Plenty of potential here and the style is excellent. |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting beginning. :) Cute, in character and mostly cliche free. :) |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 07:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Bulma was very muture in her breakup with Yamcha. I guess being on Namek did change her. Poor Vegeta has to take a cold shower{lol}
Waiting.......................... |
Reviewed By: Chaka On: November 21, 2002 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, please keep it up, I like it, it's very interesting^^ |
Reviewed By: vegetasmoon On: November 21, 2002 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great continue!! |
Reviewed By: TrunksGirl On: December 04, 2002 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great so far please update soon ^-^ |
