Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 14:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Guess i got first say!This is a good story, i thought it was quite funny, especially Vegeta. Keep writing and with a little more work you will be tops! |