| "Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: freakonaleash On: November 22, 2002 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was cool, i enjoyed every bit because you werent afraid of explicity and i like that in a story |
Reviewed By: J On: November 22, 2002 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
v. nice ur rite, it is seriously dark, but i really enjoyed it, the inuendos r....interesting, but they work really well. congrats on a job well done |
Reviewed By: Annoying Critic On: January 24, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Certainly rather interesting I must say. Some rather... disturbing and slightly perverse imagery gave it a slightly sickly and dark atmosphere. The whole creation is excellent, and the delicately insane state of the shadow in the opening is fantasically portrayed. My only criticism of your writing is a lack of true fluidity, and some sentances seem ill punctuated. Once refined a little, and considered more, you could be onto something with a LOT of potential. Keep up the good work. |
