| "If Walls Could Talk" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great lemon! I loved it as well! Bura |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 21, 2002 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was really great! You should try another type of bonding for next time. Like the one where they bite each other. thats kool. Great fic though reaaly well written. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As if you didn't arleady know why you got all 10's..lol..its obvious ne? Jeez..I swear you are just too good.. -.- ::nods her head yes:: Oki..hmm..i loved the small plot..it made your one-shot more not one-shot-y lol..does that even make sense? is that even a word? O.o heh..dun ask meh..i have no clue! XP heehee..anywho..i loved this as always..~.^ well off to read more! buh bye~
Love Always,
°¤Snoe¤°
p.s. you are an excelent lemon writer..heehee..just gotta love the lemonade! ;D |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 On: December 09, 2002 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH, it was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! Excellent writing, very emotional. I just melted when he asked if she wanted him forever!! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent lemon!!!!!!!!! You would never know it was your first. I was here looking for this story after I had read one of your stories on FF Net. You had mention the problem you were having with FF deleting it. But, alast it wasn't here. I was checking on my fav authors here and saw you had reposted it. Well Done!!!!!!!!!
Waiting.......................... |
Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 On: November 21, 2002 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I reviewed this before...but just in case I didn't...
It was wonderful. I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 10, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is definetly something about showers! I liked it! |
