| "Heated Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: I LOVED THIS!!
Reviewed By: Tasukisfoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this lemon fic realyy turned me on!! -literally- i love how you really wrote their characters in depth..!! this was the best tasuki/miaka lemon fic i've ever read!!! continue to write lemon fics!! ur great at it!!
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Title: Oh...my...gawd...
Reviewed By: ta hentai fweak On: September 30, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That made me *cough* *cough* wet myself, it was so intense! Though I'm not truly into this kinda of stuff, I really got turned on by this. Though I thought you should have used less of the slang words for um.. *cough* *cough*, It was awesome! I truly think Hotohori deserves Miaka and that you should make a fic about them. Pwease! >8D
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Reviewed By: TD On: October 02, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really lame - since when did they invent boxers in ancient China? It's a really unconvincing storyline as well. Maybe if you actually put some thought into this it might have been more enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: pirateneko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well..... i can't say i didn't get any enjoyment out of that.... i love the tasuki x miaka pairing.... she should dump tamahome and be with tasuki -^___^-.... although i'm not a huge hentai fan, that was pretty intense.... kinda sick in some places, mainly when miaka swallowed tasuki's *ahem cum... i guess i don't go for that sort of thing.
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Reviewed By: pirateneko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well..... i can't say i didn't get any enjoyment out of that.... i love the tasuki x miaka pairing.... she should dump tamahome and be with tasuki -^___^-.... although i'm not a huge hentai fan, that was pretty intense.... kinda sick in some places, mainly when miaka swallowed tasuki's *ahem cum... i guess i don't go for that sort of thing.
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Reviewed By: Fongske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First i tought i will be a bad fanfic but now i've readed it, i like it. I got excited. Nice work LadyMiakaYuuki!!! And nice HENTAI!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: love*anime On: December 12, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was disgusting. Nice work. HENTAI.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Hikitsu On: November 21, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great,but i prefer tamahome/miaka!^^
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Reviewed By: Jm On: January 23, 2003 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word sweet!!!I like TaskixMiaka but like TomohomaxMiaka better |
Reviewed By: Suzaku_123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 02:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice Hentai!I like Tasuki/Miaka together.Make a Miaka/Hotohori Hentai please? |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Um sorry, i won't flame it...but that wasn't a very good lemon. |
Reviewed By: None On: September 09, 2002 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really sick!!!!
I think you take their love for granted which serves you to masturbate to this sick fic!!!!
Truly HENTAI. |
