| "For My Grampa" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Sakabatou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Profound... I wish I had thought of something like this. I lost a grandfather too, so I guess I know what you were going through. I love your work (as long as it doesn't involve yaoi/incest) and this was a good work... I don't mean to insult you in any way, but did you inscribe this on the headstone? Maybe I will go write that poem, hmmm, too bad I didn't think of it while he was still around, oh well, he couldn't have read it anyway... That's all, bye. Wait, I have one more thing. Maybe it is sympathy, and in your shoes I would feel claustrophobic of it by now, but it is really sad (and distressing) how you have lose someone close to do your best, to express your feelings, to let your soul fly free, and to reach the top. Not that the top matters once you've lost them, and you would trade the top to bring them back, but you get the point. I know I would give up anime and manga (some of the most addictive things in my life) to have gotten to say goodbye properly. Ok, now I will leave you alone...
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Reviewed By: Star Nymph On: July 02, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*...I loved it....masterpiece...*bursts out sobbing* THIS IS SO GOOD!! |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: March 11, 2003 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your poem is really good.I am sorry that your Granpa died and I bet if he read this poem he would be damn proud of you. |
Reviewed By: Wizzard On: March 24, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. Granpa would have been proud of you for this wonderful work. I miss him too. (crying softly to myself) |
Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Crying in the corner* That was very very well written!! :( :( Makes me sad to read it...... I'm sorry your grandpa died. :( *Cries for another hour* Good writing!!!!! |
Reviewed By: IsaacandBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(cries) THAT WAS AWSOME I'M SORRY ABOUT YOU'RWE GRANDFATHER. (cries harder) very very well writen |
