| "The Pharaohs Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: November 26, 2002 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this I can't wait for more. Muses are good and bad at times.
My muse ( crazy mini yami thingy) made me write another chapter for
Trial By Cards. Grief I never intended it to end up like this.
Yami Rae: Right, silly hikari fell in love with Ryou.
Shaina: Well he's so cute and innocent for a cartoon.
Yami Rae: Oh and now she likes Bakura too.
Shaina: Shut it Rae. |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carneya.k.a Angel Wolf On: November 23, 2002 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this it is awsome. can't wait for the next chapter.
Ur Friend,
Shaina aka Angel Wolf |
Reviewed By: * i n c o h e r e n t * On: November 23, 2002 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
:D yay another update! well this is turning out interesting..... will you be introducing honda in this fic? or does he not exist? well i love this so please keep posting! |
Reviewed By: * i n c o h e r e n t * On: November 22, 2002 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do like this story. i could see why the people stole ryou... but i'm just a bit miffed that yami had to be so cruel.... but regardless this is a great plot so far. it has interest and much promise in it. hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Crimson Death On: November 22, 2002 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I am VERY glad that you decided to submit your fanfic here as well as fanfiction.net. ff.net has been removing many of my favorite fics for "explicit content" and this angered me. Grrr... *mean face* anywho...thank you for putting it here just in case those ff.net jerks decide to take it off (like "Broken Reality") DARN THEM!!!! Heh...love your fic. Write more soon. Heh...I couldn't wait so I wrote my own continuation chapter. Of course, it's not as good as yours. ^____^ I just couldn't wait for a new chapter so I wrote something to keep my love for angst and Ryou torture at bay. Heh... ^_____^ GREAT FIC!!!!! |
Reviewed By: redrose2310 On: November 22, 2002 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo cool I can't wait to see more is this going to turn into one of those master falls in love with slave slave falls in love with master things couse that would rock |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami On: December 03, 2002 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!!!!!! this is great!!!!!why'd it end so quickly?!!!!!! if y'a don't get the sequel out soon i'll just have to boil your head, i reckin'!!! 666 ^_^ 999 |
Reviewed By: Keora Kaiba On: November 23, 2002 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can use my character Keora in your story if you want. |
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