| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: butterflydreaming [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hold off on an overall rating because I think I would need to read more. There is a lovely poetic quality to the writing, although the spelling hinders the overall writing quality. I'm being generous in my ratings because this is a first fic. It is also unclear what age Sakura is at this time.
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Reviewed By: wynter On: March 10, 2003 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all the story was great, when i started to read i just couldn't keep my eyes off the monitor.
It has a nice beging, pain for loving someone the does not love u back. At less their was some action in the story line. ^_* |
