| "Dream A Little Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I mean what the title says, you have a skill in fiction Mia. I liked the way you put both Vegeta's and Bulma's worst fears into their nightmares such as Bulma not really being appreciated and Vegeta's father thinking his son as being weak.
The second chapter was just as great as the dreams in chapter one, especially when the demon put that spell on Vegeta.
But it turned out allright in the end. Awwwwwww.
Keep up your good work
Dragonheart |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: December 14, 2002 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!!! i loved this little fic! it was great! i read it from the mailing list, and i couldn't wait for the second chapter! and then i was able to read it last night, and i was so happy with the way that it ended...a bit angsty, but...hey, angst isn't that bad...i loved it and i think that it was an absolutely marvelous creation! bye! sarah |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't get the end, Vegeta woke up, and found Bulma, will Bulma wake up? Is she allready awake? Does she know now that is was a bad dream?? I don't get it. That last part was really confusing!! Good story by the way! Please update soon, I wanna see how the next part is! |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sry tht 7 should be an 8 |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...not to be mean or anything but this story was confusing. I want to see the next chappi though. did Bulma die? or was that a dream?? anywho that's what made me most confused (i didn't know if it was a dream or reality) keep it up though~Dawn Dusk ^__^ |
Reviewed By: TrunksGirl On: December 04, 2002 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it is ok but it got really confusing.I mean was it all a dream??? |
