| "The Hunter and the Hunted" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was really interesting. I was wondering how this was all going to work out and I still can't believe you killed Yugi and Ryou. I'm just glad you didn't let Seto go without him suffering. (evil smile). Nice ending by the way.
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Title: Araki_Kae
Reviewed By: Araki_Kae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to come from Adultfanfiction to here to read the whole story, but it was worth it. Much better than what I imagined, bravo.
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Reviewed By: sprinket On: June 23, 2003 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good but not great! |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bakura and Honda! Wow, like, never think they can make a pair... BUT Hey! I LUV~ IT
Wah~ Last Chapie!!! oww.... can you PLEAZ~ write some more ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 03:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Ignore the Top Review
I am SOOOOOOOOOOO sorry, I put the review in WRONG PLACE.... I mixed the two up :> |
Reviewed By: Raya On: June 08, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wondering if you would be writing a sequal to this story. Cause if you don't mind I have a few ideas for you.
1.)Would be to make Kaiba come back.
2.)His brother Mokuba brings him back to life using the cloning machine but he comes back as a vampire.
3.)Maybe he brings a few new friends back with him from Hell(mainly Yami Bakura and Marik).
4.)Kaiba now kidnaps Yami and Yugi's two kids(name as you please).
5.)He makes them believe that he is the good guy while Yugi and Yami are the bad guys.
6.)Now Yugi and Yami must save their kids before it's to late.
Hope you don't mind my help.
See Ya. :} |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Objection! I didn't read and hide...
I just read this story last night~~~
and it was great!
(even greater thing was I read through the WHOLE 21 chapters...)
I wish I could found this story earlier...
it's so GOOD~ make my life more interesting~
voting two
An item.... maybe the necklace?
Although the idea of torturing that P-thing-ma-gi-ga by taking out the EYE is quiet tempting... *EVIL LAUGH*
I remembered it was a MAJOR Ouchie...
So not the EYE, not the EYE! Jou already got a pair of powerful and attractive eyes (well.. to Seto and me at least) ^^
Anyway... I think I am talking..eh... typing too much again...(I ALWAYS DO THIS)
I'll wait for the next chapter(s!) with *move Jou in front of me* PUPPY EYES ^^ |
Reviewed By: Rhea On: February 06, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wuved that fic it was wonderful i havnt read a fic like that that was so good in a... well... i dont think i ever read a story like that but so good ever and ive read alot of stories.
keep writing kittie |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! I really liked it a lot!! I hope you can write a sequal! I'll look out for it. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I forgot what story I was review. I read so many of your sotry I forgot this one was done. I'm sorry. But I ment Great ending. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
other great chapter. can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Beautiful... That was, fab... I look forward to a sequel too!!!
I went to your site, signed the guestbook, yeah...
Ja!
Okusama KK{AKA Katmon =^.^=} |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I shall be desperately awaiting the last chapter...
NOW PUT IT UP, DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw this is a really good story. Hurry up and update. I want to read the last chapter. This is a very good story. |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you be so mean as to leave at a cliffhangere as _THAT_ ??!!??!?!?!?! |
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