| "The Hunter and the Hunted" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Raya On: June 08, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wondering if you would be writing a sequal to this story. Cause if you don't mind I have a few ideas for you.
1.)Would be to make Kaiba come back.
2.)His brother Mokuba brings him back to life using the cloning machine but he comes back as a vampire.
3.)Maybe he brings a few new friends back with him from Hell(mainly Yami Bakura and Marik).
4.)Kaiba now kidnaps Yami and Yugi's two kids(name as you please).
5.)He makes them believe that he is the good guy while Yugi and Yami are the bad guys.
6.)Now Yugi and Yami must save their kids before it's to late.
Hope you don't mind my help.
See Ya. :} |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Objection! I didn't read and hide...
I just read this story last night~~~
and it was great!
(even greater thing was I read through the WHOLE 21 chapters...)
I wish I could found this story earlier...
it's so GOOD~ make my life more interesting~
voting two
An item.... maybe the necklace?
Although the idea of torturing that P-thing-ma-gi-ga by taking out the EYE is quiet tempting... *EVIL LAUGH*
I remembered it was a MAJOR Ouchie...
So not the EYE, not the EYE! Jou already got a pair of powerful and attractive eyes (well.. to Seto and me at least) ^^
Anyway... I think I am talking..eh... typing too much again...(I ALWAYS DO THIS)
I'll wait for the next chapter(s!) with *move Jou in front of me* PUPPY EYES ^^ |
Reviewed By: Rhea On: February 06, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wuved that fic it was wonderful i havnt read a fic like that that was so good in a... well... i dont think i ever read a story like that but so good ever and ive read alot of stories.
keep writing kittie |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! I really liked it a lot!! I hope you can write a sequal! I'll look out for it. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I forgot what story I was review. I read so many of your sotry I forgot this one was done. I'm sorry. But I ment Great ending. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
other great chapter. can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Beautiful... That was, fab... I look forward to a sequel too!!!
I went to your site, signed the guestbook, yeah...
Ja!
Okusama KK{AKA Katmon =^.^=} |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I shall be desperately awaiting the last chapter...
NOW PUT IT UP, DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw this is a really good story. Hurry up and update. I want to read the last chapter. This is a very good story. |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you be so mean as to leave at a cliffhangere as _THAT_ ??!!??!?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 01:33 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. It was really depressing for most of it, but the ending was really good. I really hope you post the last chapter soon! I want to see what "changes" Kelus was talking about and why everyone gasped. Please post the last chapter soon???!!! |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: January 05, 2003 04:59 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you leave it as a CLIFFIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!?!?!?!?!?!?!? please PLEASE update soon, ok??? please please please please please please please????? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 02, 2003 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Stupid cliffhangers! I want to see what happens to Yami and what Yugi's going to do?! I really hope you post the next chapter soon! Please, please, please??!! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Kaiba....LOL serves him right for being such a jerk. Nice touch with Yami's little sister!
I hope you write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 29, 2002 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter, especially where Kaiba got pissed because Yugi was thinking of Yami. I hope you can get out the next chapter soon! |
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